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中考英语优秀作文评析(五)——自由作文123

中考英语优秀作文评析(五)——自由作文123

优秀作文评析(五)——自由作文1

【习作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.

内容要点

1.四个季节中任选一个季节。

2.被选季节的特点(气候、时间、事物、活动等)。 3.人们在此季节所从事的活动。 4.作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。

【参考范文】

I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.

【名师点评】

这是一篇描写季节的文章,文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题:

(1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。

(2)除了对季节的描述,一定要有自己的见解,这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。

作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚,结构紧密。

优秀作文评析(五)——自由作文2

【习作要求】

Write about what you are going to do after you leave school.

【参考范文】

When I finish school, I want to be a teacher. Though teachers are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels. They lead the pathway to succeed. It's quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world. We can't develop our country without knowledge. Teachers teach us knowledge. I like all of my teachers in my school. I would like to be an English teacher. It's very important for the students to learn English well today. I'll try my best to be an ideal teacher. My students can make our country better in the future.

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